Journal#14

People, particularly among women, have a desire to be more beautiful regardless of age. Even the elder feels so happy by the words that you are beautiful from people. Therefore, today, trends of plastic surgery prevail worldwide.
We can extensively classify the plastic surgery into two types. One is to remedy and the other is to make an beauty. I think It absolutely necessary to get a plastic surgery in case of the remedy. First, people who suffer from a burn or need to reform some parties of in the body by an unexpected mutation can improve quality of their lives by doing plastic surgery. For example, someone who suffer heavy burn is afraid of going out because what others may think him(her). But by doing it, he came out for the first time to the world and he found his life. However, I disagree with the plastic surgery for just making beauty. In a sense, this is extravagant behavior. If plastic surgery is done once, people have a tendency to do again. In Korea, one woman has done several times plastic surgery because she was not satisfied with the result. So, she repeated the plastic surgery. In the end, her face was seriously injured so that she was transformed beyond recognition.
Finally, I think it is better to keep an original appearance that God gives us.

journal#13

Should cigarette smoking be banned?
Today, it is worldwide trend to be banned smoking. Even though smoking is harmful to health, I don't think it should be banned completely.
First, smoking helps some people more relax. For some, it even improves concentration. Sometimes, people like to smoke when they take exam or need to carm down. Nevertheless, smoking can cause damage others second hand. Some people who has allergy to smoking can get stunned from shock.
Secondly, governments throughout the world make huge profits from levying taxes on cigarette. Government funds the profits to build public facilities such as school, hospital. However, throwing away cigarette butt make surroundings messy.
Thirdly, employing many people for tobacco industry can help economic growth of own country's. But some people contradict that treating diseases caused by smoking cost a great deal of money.
Finally, I don't think cigarette smoking should be banned because people have rights to choose about it. However, without cigarettes, the world would be better place.

journal#12

Should girls ask boys out?

We usually expressed girls have passive characters and boys have active ones in the past. When I was in adolescent, I was too shy to tell the boy first. However, according to social trends are greatly changed, girls become no more girlish, boys no more boyish. Sometimes, we often feel that boys are more shy and weaker than woman. Besides, some people think it doesn’t matter girls ask boys out in the dance party on account of trend being changed, However, it is more beautiful to keep the natural state originally. Of course, it is important to describe the thought truly. Sometimes, it is too passive to lose valuable things. But acting exaggeratedly can make a mess of nature.
In spite of some people insist on the fact that girls have a right equal to boys, girls should recognize that there are many differences from boys and girls physically and mentally. It is more girlish to represent her feelings truly when boys ask girls out.